Joe Stockley was in an expensive sports car and deep trouble. This time, he had really let his mouth and his exotic foreign lover run away with him and it was getting beyond a joke and his immediate circle of friends in the form of rumours and speculation.
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ReplyDeleteHaha! I was just learning about syllepsis in my Writing and Rhetoric Program. Awesome stuff, it never fails to make me laugh.
ReplyDeleteI have no idea what syllepsis is and wet pants.
ReplyDeleteNot syllepsis but still worthy of mention: "He was a seaman (sic) soaked tissue in the landfill of society."
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Do you know 'Madeira, M'Dear' by Flanders and Swann? Lyrics here.
ReplyDeleteIt's got three lovely examples:
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ReplyDelete@pj I think the first example is indeed lovely but I find the third to be awkward ("Up her mind" doesn't work for me). However, I think the line, "She lowered her standards by raising her glass" is nothing short of brilliant.
What is syllepsis and your point?
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ReplyDelete@Ronald, I believe the third verse makes sense if taken thus:
ReplyDeleteShe made no reply.
She made up her mind.
She made a dash for the door.
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ReplyDeleteThe Up her mind part was my favorite, @Ronald
ReplyDelete'up her mind' is *supposed* to be awkward. It's syllepsis, it's awkward by deinition - and the added awkwardness of 'up her mind' is a feature, not a bug.
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ReplyDeleteI think Ronald's point is that in
She made no reply.
She made up her mind.
She made a dash for the door.
the middle sentence has a different verb from the first and last ('made up' vs 'made'). This presumably is deliberately done for the awkward effect, but at the break-neck speed of the recording it took me a few years to realize that this verse really had a matching three-part syllepsis.
"made ... up her mind" it has a sort of ogden nash flavor to it and me--istr he was fond of splitting phrasal verbs, though usually to achieve a rhyme, rather than for parallelism.
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